题目类型与核心要求
特征:通常会给出一个社会现象、一个趋势或一个观点,要求你讨论其优点 和 缺点**。

常见问法:
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. (讨论利弊)
- Do you think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks? (你认为利大于弊吗?)
- What are the pros and cons of this trend? (这个趋势的优缺点是什么?)
- To what extent do you agree or disagree? (在多大程度上你同意或不同意?) —— 这类题目虽然看似同意/不同意,但通常也需要你分析其利弊,然后给出自己的立场。
核心要求:
- 全面性: 不能只谈优点或只谈缺点,必须两者都涉及。
- 平衡性: 两个方面的论述篇幅和深度要大致相当,除非题目明确要求你判断利弊大小。
- 逻辑性: 论点之间要有清晰的逻辑关系,论证要充分。
- 个人立场: 在结尾段,你需要清晰地总结自己的观点,如果题目问 "Do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?",你必须明确回答 "Yes" 或 "No",并重申你的核心理由。
经典四段式结构
对于这类作文,最稳妥、最清晰的结构是“四段式”。
第一段:引言段
目的: 引入话题,背景介绍,并明确提出本文将要讨论的利弊。
结构:
- 背景句: 用一两句话重新描述题目中的现象或问题,展示你对话题的理解。
- 问题陈述: 明确指出这是一个有争议的话题,存在着利弊两个方面。
- thesis statement (中心论点): 清晰地预告本文将要讨论的内容,这是段落的灵魂。
示例 (以 "远程办公" 为例):
The proliferation of the internet and digital technology has revolutionized the modern workplace, giving rise to the phenomenon of remote work. While this shift offers significant flexibility and potential cost savings, it also presents notable challenges in terms of team cohesion and work-life balance. This essay will discuss the primary advantages and disadvantages of working from home.
第二段:优点段
目的: 详细论述题目所讨论现象的优点。
结构:
- 主题句: 段落的第一句话,清晰概括本段的核心论点。
- 解释: 对主题句进行解释,说明为什么这是一个优点。
- 举例: 用具体的例子来支撑你的论点,让论证更有说服力。
- 小结 (可选): 可以用一句话简要总结本段。
示例 (远程办公的优点):
One of the most significant advantages of remote work is the enhanced flexibility it offers employees. This newfound autonomy allows individuals to structure their workday around their personal lives, leading to increased job satisfaction and reduced stress levels. For instance, parents can more easily manage childcare responsibilities, while employees can avoid the stress of peak-hour commutes. Ultimately, this flexibility can result in a more motivated and productive workforce.
第三段:缺点段
目的: 详细论述题目所讨论现象的缺点。
结构:
- 与优点段完全平行,使用同样的 "主题句 + 解释 + 举例" 结构。
示例 (远程办公的缺点):
However, the shift to remote work is not without its drawbacks, chief among being the potential erosion of company culture and team spirit. When employees are physically separated, spontaneous interactions and informal collaborations that foster a sense of belonging become scarce. This can lead to feelings of isolation and disconnection from the organization's goals. For example, onboarding new employees remotely can be a challenging and impersonal process, making it harder for them to integrate and feel part of the team. Consequently, this lack of cohesion can negatively impact long-term employee retention and innovation.
第四段:结论段
目的: 总结全文,重申核心观点,并给出最终的判断或建议。
结构:
- 总结句: 用不同的措辞重述引言段的中心论点。
- 要点回顾: 简要概括优点段和缺点段的主要论点。
- 最终判断/立场: 这是结论段最重要的部分,明确回答题目中的问题(利是否大于弊?),可以提出一个折中的解决方案或对未来的展望。
示例 (远程办公的结论):
In conclusion, while remote work provides undeniable benefits such as flexibility and autonomy, its negative effects on team cohesion and company culture are equally significant. On the one hand, employees enjoy greater freedom and potentially higher productivity. On the other hand, the loss of face-to-face interaction can lead to a disengaged workforce. Therefore, I believe that while the advantages are compelling, the drawbacks are more profound, and thus, the benefits do not necessarily outweigh the disadvantages. A more sustainable approach might be a hybrid model, which combines the best of both worlds.
高分技巧与注意事项
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词汇多样性:
- 避免重复使用 "advantage/disadvantage",可以使用
merits/demerits,pros/cons,benefits/drawbacks,strengths/weaknesses,positive/negative aspects等。 - 使用更高级的连接词,如
Nevertheless,Conversely,On the one hand... on the other hand,While it is true that... it must also be acknowledged that...
- 避免重复使用 "advantage/disadvantage",可以使用
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句式结构:
- 多样化使用简单句、复合句和复杂句,使用 "Although..." (让步状语从句), "While..." (对比状语从句), "This is primarily because..." (原因状语从句) 等。
- 避免所有句子都以 "主语+谓语" 的开头。
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论证深度:
- 不要只罗列观点,每个观点后面都要跟上 "Why?" 和 "How?" 的解释。
- 例子要具体、相关,可以是个人经历、社会现象、新闻报道或普遍认知。
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审题清晰:
仔细阅读题目,看清楚是只要求 "discuss the pros and cons",还是要求 "give your opinion" 或 "say whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages",后者要求你在结论中给出明确立场。
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时间管理:
- 雅思写作时间为40分钟,建议分配如下:
- Task 1 (图表作文): 约20分钟
- Task 2 (利弊作文): 约40分钟
- 在Task 2中,花3-5分钟构思和列提纲,25-30分钟写作,最后留2-3分钟检查。
- 雅思写作时间为40分钟,建议分配如下:
实战演练题目
** Many people believe that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
分析: 这是一个典型的“利弊分析+立场”题目,你需要讨论大学免费的优点和缺点,然后给出你自己的立场(同意、不同意或部分同意)。
提纲构思:
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Introduction:
- 背景:高等教育的成本和可及性是当今社会热议的话题。
- 中心论点:虽然免费大学教育有其吸引人的好处,但考虑到其巨大的财政负担和对教育质量的潜在影响,我并不完全赞同。
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Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages / Why people agree):
- 主题句: The primary argument for free university education is its potential to promote social equality and create a more educated society.
- 解释: It removes the financial barrier for students from low-income families, allowing them to pursue higher education based on merit rather than their family's wealth.
- 举例: This can lead to a more diverse and skilled workforce, ultimately boosting the national economy and innovation.
- 小结: In this sense, free education can be a powerful tool for social mobility.
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Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages / Why I disagree):
- 主题句: However, implementing a completely free university system would place an unsustainable financial burden on the government and taxpayers.
- 解释: Education is incredibly expensive to provide, covering faculty salaries, facilities, and resources. If the government has to bear this entire cost, it might lead to cuts in other essential public services like healthcare or infrastructure.
- 举例: Furthermore, making education free could potentially devalue the degree itself and lead to overcrowded universities, which might compromise the quality of teaching and learning experience.
- 小结: Therefore, a fully funded system may not be the most efficient or effective solution.
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Conclusion:
- While the goal of providing universal access to higher education is commendable, making it entirely free for everyone is a simplistic solution with significant drawbacks.
- 回顾: Proponents argue it fosters
