专四小作文范文
英语专业四级考试(TEM-4)是英语专业学生的重要里程碑,而小作文部分往往是考生容易忽视却极为关键的得分点,一篇优秀的小作文不仅需要清晰的逻辑结构,还要具备准确的语言表达和恰当的写作技巧,以下将从写作框架、语言运用和常见问题三个方面,为考生提供实用的提升方法,并附上范文参考。
小作文的核心要求
专四小作文通常以应用文为主,如书信、通知、便条等,字数控制在100-150词,评分标准主要包括:
- 格式正确:不同类型的应用文有固定格式,如书信需包含称呼、正文、结尾敬语和署名。 完整**:题目要求的所有要点必须涵盖,避免遗漏。
- 语言准确:语法正确、词汇恰当,避免中式英语。
- 逻辑清晰:段落衔接自然,观点表达有条理。
高效写作框架
书信类作文
以建议信为例,结构可分为三部分:
- 开头段:明确写作目的,简要说明背景。
示例:Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to offer some suggestions on improving the school library services. 段*:分点阐述建议,每段一个核心观点,辅以理由或例子。
示例:Firstly, extending the opening hours would benefit students who study late. Secondly, adding more digital resources could enhance research efficiency.* - 结尾段:礼貌总结,表达期待回复或感谢。
示例:I hope these suggestions are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.
通知类作文
通知需突出时间、地点、事件等关键信息,语言简洁。
示例:
Notice
All students are invited to attend the lecture on "Cross-Cultural Communication" by Prof. Lee at 3:00 p.m., Friday, in Hall A. Please arrive 10 minutes early.
语言提升技巧
避免常见语法错误
- 主谓一致:复数主语搭配复数动词(The books are 而非 The books is)。
- 时态统一:全文时态需一致,如过去事件用一般过去时。
- 冠词使用:可数名词单数前加冠词(a book 或 the book)。
丰富句式结构
- 长短句结合:避免全篇简单句,适当加入从句或分词结构。
原句:The meeting was cancelled. We were disappointed.
优化:The meeting being cancelled, we felt deeply disappointed. - 使用衔接词:如 however, furthermore, in addition 增强逻辑性。
精准选词
- 避免笼统词汇(good → beneficial);
- 多用学术词汇(get → obtain);
- 注意正式与非正式语境区别(kids → children)。
范文分析与仿写
范文1:建议信 ** 假设你是学生会成员,就校园环保问题向校长写一封建议信。
Dear Principal Chen,
I am writing to propose several eco-friendly initiatives for our campus. Firstly, replacing plastic containers in the canteen with biodegradable ones could significantly reduce waste. Secondly, organizing monthly tree-planting activities would raise environmental awareness. Lastly, placing recycling bins in each classroom would encourage students to sort trash properly.
I believe these measures will make our school greener. Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
分析: 格式完整,建议具体,语言简洁。
范文2:通知 ** 以学生会名义写一则关于英语演讲比赛的通知。
Notice
The annual English Speech Contest will be held on March 15th at 2:00 p.m. in the Auditorium. Topics include "Global Citizenship" and "Digital Future". Participants must register by March 10th via email (speech@school.edu). All attendees will receive certificates.
Students' Union
分析: 关键信息突出,无冗余内容。
常见问题与修正
- 格式错误:漏写署名或日期。
修正:检查应用文类型对应的格式要求。 偏离*:未覆盖所有题目要点。
修正:写作前列提纲,逐条核对。* - 语言啰嗦:重复表达相同意思。
修正:删减冗余副词或短语(very uniqueunique*)。
备考建议
- 多读范文:分析高分作文的结构和用词。
- 限时练习:模拟考试环境,15分钟内完成一篇。
- 反复修改:写完后检查语法和逻辑,或请老师批改。
英语写作能力的提升离不开持续练习和针对性改进,掌握基本框架后,考生应注重细节打磨,从每一篇习作中积累经验,考场上的游刃有余,往往源于平时的扎实准备。